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BMS Dash-34, ver. 4.37.3
Global corrections: Consider changing these inconsistent terms used throughout the manual.
nonnuclear to non-nuclear
laser guided to laser-guided
inertially aided munitions to inertially-aided munitions
IAM’S to IAMs
built in to built-in
Page: 475
Original sentence: In order for ab LGB to guide on a laser beam, their codes must match.
Corrected sentence: In order for a LGB to guide on a laser beam, the codes must match.
Page: 475
Original sentence: An LGB is set on the ground with a specific laser code, usually by the weapon crew and cross checked by the pilot during it’s pre-flight.
Corrected sentence: A LGB … during its pre-flight.
Change An to A; change it’s to its. Consider changing weapon to weapons.
Page: 475
Original sentence: For specific operations and procedures for releasing laser Guided bombs, refer to the TGP, UFC, HUD and MFD chapters in this manual and training manual for Paveway II release procedure training (Training mission #11)
Corrected sentence: For … guided bombs, … and MFDS… the training …(Training mission #11).
Uncapitalize guided, insert the, change MFD to MFDS to match the chapter title, and add period at end of sentence.
Page: 477
Correction: For items 2, 3, and 4 in section 4.2.8.2.2, add a period at the end of each sentence.
Page 605
Original sentence: LDR type)
Correction: All acronyms in the Glossary for the letter L starting with LDR are incorrect due a formatting (spacing) mistake.