Really well done! You’ve just added a wonderful option for BMS, I reckon, as being in VR can make normal YT tutorials or even kneeboard text-tutorials a little tricky. Well for me, at least.
A couple of bits that I really liked - your highlighting of the part of the cockpit the command referred to was really clever. Also liked the way you announced chapters - eg “end of pre-startup checklist”
You might also think about adding a little explanation - no more than a sentence or two. For example something like “this system checks to ensure that…” or " the INS alignment takes about x minutes"
Lastly, a stupid question: the script ‘does all the things’, right? As in, I just watch the actions take place like a video as opposed to BMS waiting for me to click the stuff it wants me too (EPU/chocks notwithstanding)
Again, this is brilliant work and you’ve added something wonderful to something already wonderful!